Sunday, 24 May 2015

I have been learning to give detail to my ideas.

If I had a dream garden I would want Venus Fly traps. This is because they will protect my house from flies. They are like monsters because they eat meat even flesh. I would even keep one in my kitchen. This is why I would have Venus Fly traps. 

1 comment:

  1. Great work Michael! I can see you have followed the plan very well! I think next time you could add even more detail and even a couple more facts to your writing :)

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